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„I wish“ of Leonarda Hommersom
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Rolph David (ronan.david
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28.05.2024
Hello Leonarda,
I think the little devil has crept into your poem. Surely you meant the word ‘were’ when you said ‘where’. Today's bad habit of writing the personal pronoun of the 1st person singular in lower case is the most annoying thing in it.
Apart from that, I think the content of your poem is beautiful, as it gets to the heart of what you want. Very nice!
I think the little devil has crept into your poem. Surely you meant the word ‘were’ when you said ‘where’. Today's bad habit of writing the personal pronoun of the 1st person singular in lower case is the most annoying thing in it.
Apart from that, I think the content of your poem is beautiful, as it gets to the heart of what you want. Very nice!
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