Edda Graedener

Decree

He felt awful, because of the pile of homework.

He thought: “They decree us everything, but ohh they don´t decree us to eat.“

So he stopped eating.

Some days later, he felt ill, he thought about his problem again.

“They don´t decree us to breathe!“

So he stopped.

I write this mini-saga in school and i think she is good, now i hope, that other people can say me, what they think about it.
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